Sexual Themes and Strong Languedge are In thsi FanFiction.
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The Story is Being Told By Stephano's POV.
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Piggeh's POV.
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**Stephano's POV**
I Woke Up first then Piggeh and slowly made my way out of the bed , Grabed my clothes and and The ring, after retrieving all of my stuff I went to the bathroom to shower. In the shower once again the the thought of Asking Piggeh to Marry me Hit me , I Love him! God danm it. I mean.... I Guess i could Try. And so I Peacefully continued to Shower.
**Piggeh's POV**
Slowly I woke up the Morning light from the window Filled the whole room , I looked next to me and Stephano was gone. Odd... He never wakes up first , But then I heard the sound of a shower going on I guess he was in the shower . I Layed down and stared up at the ceeling while thinking to myself 'God Stephano is so Sexy... I Love him so much. I remembered when he first met he had a bad temper but after we went through last night i love him even though he still has his bad temper.'
**Stephano's POV**
I Got out of the bathroom fully dressed and Piggeh looked at me , he was smiling at me . He Got up and got dressed. I looked at him "Good Morning Piggeh , did you sleep well?.." he nodded and once he was dressed he headed towards the door he said that we should go hang out with mr.chair and do something fun. But I stopped him he looked at me in confiusion . I Kneeled down and pulled out the ring and said "W-Will You M-Marry me?" I felt my heart pound from excitement i looked at his eyes , he seemed shocked.
**Piggeh's POV**
I was In Shock , 'He...He asked me to marry him!' tears streamed down my face as i shouted "Yes!" I Huged him and Kissed him. God This was the Most wonderfull moment of my life. The Man I Loved since I first layed eyes on him and He asked me to marry him! I looked up at him and said "God Stephano... I Love you and Yes I'll marry you."
**Stephano's POV**
I was Filled with joy that he sayed yes. But then i asked him "Should we have the Marrige?" He Shaked his head no , I slipped the ring on his finger and I already had mines on . I felt so happy and so was he. we Left the room and went to do something fun to waste the day off. When we met up with Mr.Chair he asked us about the Ring and I explained to him what happened and he smiles he said he was Happy for us and he didn't mind that we were married . So today me , Piggeh and Mr.Chair enjoyed the day and played alot of things , like checkers , Poker , Cards , and much more. Today was a Good Day.
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TO BE CONTINUED???

















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It wouldn't seem so bad if you gave background of Stephano and Piggeh liking each other for a long time, but this seems pretty stubborn. Like I've said before, I think it's a good idea but the action is happening too quickly for my tastes and the spelling, grammar and repetitive words make it seem a bit boring.
Slowing down the action by putting in some more random or trivial things into the story. Right now, it seems like a lot of sex along with the proposal.
As I've said before, a thesaurus and dictionary will help you to no ends. Being too repetitive is one of my own fears, so I want to help liven up your story ^^
I'm not trying to be mean, I'm really not! It's just that I want to help improve your story by telling you stuff you could do to improve. I'm sorry if I seem really harsh ;w;
I'll take your comment as a complement and next time i'll take it into more consideration.
Alright then, good luck ^^